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Post by Silverstream on Jun 3, 2006 11:36:15 GMT -5
I was just giving a little nudge for them. I wasn't actually thinking of deleting it anytime soon.
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Post by Katze on Jun 3, 2006 12:38:12 GMT -5
Sorry for the misunderstanding...
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Post by Rainstorm on Jun 3, 2006 13:52:10 GMT -5
Are we allowed to use names from the books? Because Frostfur was a ThunderClan queen in the Warriors series... She already existed...
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Post by Katze on Jun 3, 2006 13:54:31 GMT -5
Yes we are. Keep in mind that this site was made many a year away from the origional Clans. The probability that any other cat in the future would not have the same name, as say Graystripe would be enormous.
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Post by Rainstorm on Jun 3, 2006 14:01:52 GMT -5
Ah. Thanks; that's good to know.
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Frost
Apprentice
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Post by Frost on Jun 4, 2006 7:05:12 GMT -5
ok. i made more changes
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Post by Silverstream on Jun 4, 2006 7:36:02 GMT -5
Please always use correct grammer and punctuation, (I.E. i should be I) and your bio still needs more on Personality and Appearance. And somewhere on your thread, namely at the top, you have to have Name: Frostfur.
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Frost
Apprentice
Posts: 57
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Post by Frost on Jun 4, 2006 11:09:55 GMT -5
OK, I made even more changes, and could someone tell me what else i have to do? ?
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Post by Silverstream on Jun 4, 2006 18:05:02 GMT -5
You still need to fix some punctuation.
name:Frostfur change to Name: Frostfur
she also has shining blue eyes. change to She also has shining blue eyes.
When she is in battle, her white pelt is spatteres with blood, turning it red. change to When she is in battle, her white pelt is spattered with blood, turning it red.
There's to many to list. Please do a spell-check. Also, add like 5 more lines of Personality and Appearance.
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Post by Rainstorm on Jun 4, 2006 21:15:41 GMT -5
Sorry to bother you all again about the name thing, but the rules say that you can't have the same name as a character in the books... And I know that it isn't really my place, since I'm not even a gmod anymore, but I think that maybe you should change the rules if we are not going by that particular rule anmore. Just a suggestion so that people don't get confused...
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Post by Katze on Jun 4, 2006 21:23:53 GMT -5
By the way things look on some of the bios, some people don't even read the rules. But you are right. I will change that rule in the rules. Thank You Rainstorm
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Frost
Apprentice
Posts: 57
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Post by Frost on Jun 6, 2006 15:19:14 GMT -5
i hate to say this, but she is a white cat! there is nothing else to it!!
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Aleen
Warrior
It's hard being different....
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Post by Aleen on Jun 6, 2006 18:08:40 GMT -5
Okay, don't mean to butt in, but actually there's a lot more you can have to it. Does she have any interesting scars or unusally long fangs or something like that? If it helps, look at some of the more experienced players cat bios for ideas, just don't copy. In battle do her eyes look different? Does she have a limp? Is there something really remarkable that make other cats stop and stare? Don't think of her as just a white cat, because you need to make this character come alive and that kind of thinking doesn't help you in doing that.
Okay, I'll step off my soap box now.
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Post by Katze on Jun 6, 2006 22:39:21 GMT -5
Chaos! Stop please. I know you are only trying to help, but I said this on another thread. That is like letting them cheat off of your paper. (Not good) Please Stop.
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Frost
Apprentice
Posts: 57
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Post by Frost on Jun 7, 2006 7:07:32 GMT -5
i made more changes.
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