Thread for Maplewind - Maplekit:WindClan:she-cat

[Flintpelt [Spideh]]

Post away, dear :33

[Maplepaw]

Name: Maplekit
Do you honor?: Yes
Age: 4 moons
Gender: She-cat
Appearance: Maplekit is a dark brown she-cat with streaks of lighter brown covering her fluff-like fur. Her chest has a dab of white, which is most likely to grow as she matures, as well as white paws and tail-tip. She is long-haired, and her long fur has a glossy look, making her seem more like a RiverClan cat, though she would never betray her clan. Maplekit is small, even for a kit. If she had any litter mates, she most-likely would have been the runt. She is promised to be a good hunter, for her legs are somewhat long compared to her body size. Her eyes are a distinctive, enthusiastic light green color, like the leaves in a forest. In the dark, her green eyes gleam bright yellow. She has long ears, a slim muzzle, and the build of an abbysian.
RP Example: Maplekit lie silently in the back corner of the nursery . She gave her chest a quick lick, and gazed thoughtfully through the entrance of the nursery. The morning sun glowed warmly, filling the sky with a bundle of colors. Streamheart sent out hunting patrol, while the border patrol reported to Hawkstar. A soft wind from the moorland blew into the nursery, slightly ruffling Maplekit's fur.
After a few minutes, Maplekit became restless, wanting to leave the nursery and explore the camp, though she knew the queens would not approve. She would have to ask permission of a warrior. Maplekit rose to her paws, and stretched daintily. As quietly as she could, Maplekit headed toward the entrance of the nursery. She stopped at the entrance, and looked around to talk to the nearest warrior. As the deputy passed by, Maplekit drew in a breath to speak, but then thought better of it. Every cat in the camp seemed busy, so why would Streamheart care to listen to her request. Brown tail drooping, Maplekit padded to the back of the nursery to relax and take a nap. She settled her self down, and faded into sleep.
Clan: WindClan
Rank: Kit
Breed: Unknown. Most likely is a mix. Has the build of an abbysian, but her coat is not similar to that of an abbysian cat.
Personality: Maplekit is mature(for her age), smart, loyal, understanding, and curious(of course!). She is always wanting to know more about everything, and her constant asking sometimes frustrates the queens(especially when they don't know the answer!). Although she can be a bit too enthusiastic, she understands that she needs to do what she is told. Maplekit also is deeply understanding to others feelings, and is often told that she will make a wonderful parent. Also relating to this, Maplekit enjoys relieving her feelings by talking to others, so she has practically no personal secrets. Sometimes Maplekit's personality can do her good, but can also make her quite a handful.
History: At 3 weeks old, both of Maplekit's parents' were found to be dead. They had gone on a border patrol with one other cat, when they stumbled into four rogues. Protecting the clan with their lives, the three cats chased the rogues off, which resulted in Maplekit's parents death. This event has given Maplekit a strong belief and loyalty to StarClan, and has also given her a great respect to the ancient ways. After her parents death, Maplekit was adopted by the nursery's queens, and now hardly remembers her parents. Though Maplekit may have never got the chance to form a close family bond with her parents, she visits them in her dreams.
Pictures: None.

[<--a r r o w _ s p i r i t--«]

xD Is that mine Spiritkit being used? Squee!

I'm not an admin, or anything, but I can tell you that you'll need more history and personality. And definitely more appearance. I'd say quadruple the length...

[Silverstream]

Yeah. You need like 6 lines of Appearance, Personality, and History. For the Rp example, you can't control Spiritkit. Even if you have the owner's permission.

[Maplepaw]

Oops! I'm REALLY sorry! That was unintentional!!! I'm sorry Spirit, if your mad or something. I apoligize. I feel so bad .
About the appearance and such, I can fix that. If I repost, and it still isn't long enough, then please tell me! Thanks!
And once again, I'm REALLY sorry Arrow_Spirit! *Shrinks away*

[<--a r r o w _ s p i r i t--«]

Me no ish mad. I was happy-ish. It is an IC example, so I guess it wouldn't be considered Powerplaying... oo;;

[Katze]

Okay!
I would say just add onto the Appearence a little, and that be all!

[Silverstream]

Fix the following sentence. It's confuzzling.
Maplekit lie in the back corner of the nursery, small paws tucked neatly under herself.

And technically you are still controlling another cat. Streamheart. It doesn't matter for now, but you'll need to watch that in the future.

[Maplepaw]

Okay, I added to the personality and changed the sentences. Is it okay now?

[Katze]

Accepted ;D