Post by Flintpelt [Spideh] on Oct 11, 2006 12:03:39 GMT -5
-sighs-
I'll just correct it myself.
Appearance - Demonkit is a black kitten with a splash of creamy white like milk color on his front two paws all the way up to his knees. He has long sleek black fur. His right eye is yellow-green and it changes to dark green with light green spots like his brothers at night. They also light up in darkness and moonlight. Demonkit is really a strong kitten, but very quiet. His muscles are not as big as his brother but he is still very muscular, his muscles are not bulging they are hidden under his fur. Also his left eye is not even one-third bigger than his right, and his left eye is dark yellow instead of yellow-green like his right. His long black fur has sheen to it when the moonlight hits it. The tops of his ears also have a creamy white on them like they were dipped slightly in milk. He holds himself submissively; with body lowered his ears are low as well. Demonkit is not as good looking as Strongkit and his splashes of white on him make him stick out like a sore paw. He also has a splash of white on the tip of his tail the same creamy white color as his ears and legs. His nose is not the same black as his fur it’s a more dark black like the darkest shadow.
Correction - Demonkit is a black kitten with a splash of creamy white like milk color on his front two paws all the way up to his knees. He has long sleek black fur. His right eye is yellow-green and it changes to dark green with light green spots like his brother's at night. They also light up in darkness and moonlight. Demonkit is really a strong kitten, but very quiet. His muscles are not as big as his brother's but he is still very muscular. His muscles are not bulging; they are hidden under his fur. Also his left eye is not even one-third bigger than his right, and his left eye is dark yellow instead of yellow-green like his right. His long black fur has a sheen to it when the moonlight hits it. The tops of his ears also have a creamy white on them like they were dipped slightly in milk. He holds himself submissively; with body lowered, and his ears are low as well. Demonkit is not as good looking as Strongkit and his splashes of white on him make him stick out like a sore paw. He also has a splash of white on the tip of his tail the same creamy white color as his ears and legs. His nose is not the same black as his fur; it’s a more dark black like the darkest shadow.
Personality - Doesn't talk much, but when he has something to say he says it. He is almost always laying in a shaded corner of the camp. He is very lazy but he can be easily motivated to do things like wash himself, and go on little errands for the queens, ect. And he is very serious when something bad is happening. Like his brother Strongkit, Demonkit is very clever but rarely put his smarts to use, but uses them when he has to. He greatly respects his clan and its leader. Demonkit envy's apprentices, and greatly admires warrior's. He likes all the queens and their very nice to him too. He loves to go to the elders den and listen to their stories, and he greatly admires their wisdom, and he loves hearing all the stories. He looks up to the deputy, and it’s his goal to be one. And he likes the new born kits and how there so cute and cuddly. But there is a dark side to him. When he gets mad, it’s not very good, he has a BIG temper, and is very fierce to everyone when he is mad, even his brother. And thinks as if the whole world were against him. And makes a fit about the smallest things. Sometimes he won’t even listen to his leader if hes mad enough, but usually does. And over all he is a good kit, he can be a handful at times but it’s pretty easy to deal with it.
Correction - He doesn't talk much, but when he has something to say he says it. He is almost always laying in a shaded corner of the camp. He is very lazy but he can be easily motivated to do things like wash himself, and go on little errands for the queens, ect. And he is very serious when something bad is happening. Like his brother Strongkit, Demonkit is very clever but rarely put his smarts to use, but uses them when he has to. He greatly respects his clan and its leader. Demonkit envies apprentices, and greatly admires warriors. He likes all the queens and they're very nice to him too. He loves to go to the elders' den and listen to their stories, and he greatly admires their wisdom, and he loves hearing all the stories. He looks up to the deputy, and it’s his goal to be one. And he likes the newborn kits and how there so cute and cuddly. But there is a dark side to him. When he gets mad, it’s not very good, he has a BIG temper, and is very fierce to everyone when he is mad, even his brother. And thinks as if the whole world were against him. And makes a fit about the smallest things. Sometimes he won’t even listen to his leader if he's mad enough, but usually does. And over all he is a good kit, he can be a handful at times but it’s pretty easy to deal with it.
History - When his mother died in labor, Demonkit and Strongkit were the only two born. But their father died when they were 1 moon old. But now A she-cat named Dawnfur is taking care of them, but recently she died getting to close to the Thunderpath. But now they are only 1 moon away from being an apprentice. His parents named him Demonkit because he is very fierce. When he was just one and a half moon old he opened his eyes and scratched his brother above his left eye and left a mark that would be there for the rest of his brother’s life.
Correction - When his mother died in labor, Demonkit and Strongkit were the only two born. But their father died when they were 1 moon old. But now a she-cat named Dawnfur is taking care of them, but recently she died getting to close to the Thunderpath. But now they are only 1 moon away from being an apprentice. His parents named him Demonkit because he is very fierce. When he was just one and a half moon old he opened his eyes and scratched his brother above his left eye and left a mark that would be there for the rest of his brother’s life.
There. Once that's fixed, then I'll accept.
I'll just correct it myself.
Appearance - Demonkit is a black kitten with a splash of creamy white like milk color on his front two paws all the way up to his knees. He has long sleek black fur. His right eye is yellow-green and it changes to dark green with light green spots like his brothers at night. They also light up in darkness and moonlight. Demonkit is really a strong kitten, but very quiet. His muscles are not as big as his brother but he is still very muscular, his muscles are not bulging they are hidden under his fur. Also his left eye is not even one-third bigger than his right, and his left eye is dark yellow instead of yellow-green like his right. His long black fur has sheen to it when the moonlight hits it. The tops of his ears also have a creamy white on them like they were dipped slightly in milk. He holds himself submissively; with body lowered his ears are low as well. Demonkit is not as good looking as Strongkit and his splashes of white on him make him stick out like a sore paw. He also has a splash of white on the tip of his tail the same creamy white color as his ears and legs. His nose is not the same black as his fur it’s a more dark black like the darkest shadow.
Correction - Demonkit is a black kitten with a splash of creamy white like milk color on his front two paws all the way up to his knees. He has long sleek black fur. His right eye is yellow-green and it changes to dark green with light green spots like his brother's at night. They also light up in darkness and moonlight. Demonkit is really a strong kitten, but very quiet. His muscles are not as big as his brother's but he is still very muscular. His muscles are not bulging; they are hidden under his fur. Also his left eye is not even one-third bigger than his right, and his left eye is dark yellow instead of yellow-green like his right. His long black fur has a sheen to it when the moonlight hits it. The tops of his ears also have a creamy white on them like they were dipped slightly in milk. He holds himself submissively; with body lowered, and his ears are low as well. Demonkit is not as good looking as Strongkit and his splashes of white on him make him stick out like a sore paw. He also has a splash of white on the tip of his tail the same creamy white color as his ears and legs. His nose is not the same black as his fur; it’s a more dark black like the darkest shadow.
Personality - Doesn't talk much, but when he has something to say he says it. He is almost always laying in a shaded corner of the camp. He is very lazy but he can be easily motivated to do things like wash himself, and go on little errands for the queens, ect. And he is very serious when something bad is happening. Like his brother Strongkit, Demonkit is very clever but rarely put his smarts to use, but uses them when he has to. He greatly respects his clan and its leader. Demonkit envy's apprentices, and greatly admires warrior's. He likes all the queens and their very nice to him too. He loves to go to the elders den and listen to their stories, and he greatly admires their wisdom, and he loves hearing all the stories. He looks up to the deputy, and it’s his goal to be one. And he likes the new born kits and how there so cute and cuddly. But there is a dark side to him. When he gets mad, it’s not very good, he has a BIG temper, and is very fierce to everyone when he is mad, even his brother. And thinks as if the whole world were against him. And makes a fit about the smallest things. Sometimes he won’t even listen to his leader if hes mad enough, but usually does. And over all he is a good kit, he can be a handful at times but it’s pretty easy to deal with it.
Correction - He doesn't talk much, but when he has something to say he says it. He is almost always laying in a shaded corner of the camp. He is very lazy but he can be easily motivated to do things like wash himself, and go on little errands for the queens, ect. And he is very serious when something bad is happening. Like his brother Strongkit, Demonkit is very clever but rarely put his smarts to use, but uses them when he has to. He greatly respects his clan and its leader. Demonkit envies apprentices, and greatly admires warriors. He likes all the queens and they're very nice to him too. He loves to go to the elders' den and listen to their stories, and he greatly admires their wisdom, and he loves hearing all the stories. He looks up to the deputy, and it’s his goal to be one. And he likes the newborn kits and how there so cute and cuddly. But there is a dark side to him. When he gets mad, it’s not very good, he has a BIG temper, and is very fierce to everyone when he is mad, even his brother. And thinks as if the whole world were against him. And makes a fit about the smallest things. Sometimes he won’t even listen to his leader if he's mad enough, but usually does. And over all he is a good kit, he can be a handful at times but it’s pretty easy to deal with it.
History - When his mother died in labor, Demonkit and Strongkit were the only two born. But their father died when they were 1 moon old. But now A she-cat named Dawnfur is taking care of them, but recently she died getting to close to the Thunderpath. But now they are only 1 moon away from being an apprentice. His parents named him Demonkit because he is very fierce. When he was just one and a half moon old he opened his eyes and scratched his brother above his left eye and left a mark that would be there for the rest of his brother’s life.
Correction - When his mother died in labor, Demonkit and Strongkit were the only two born. But their father died when they were 1 moon old. But now a she-cat named Dawnfur is taking care of them, but recently she died getting to close to the Thunderpath. But now they are only 1 moon away from being an apprentice. His parents named him Demonkit because he is very fierce. When he was just one and a half moon old he opened his eyes and scratched his brother above his left eye and left a mark that would be there for the rest of his brother’s life.
There. Once that's fixed, then I'll accept.