Ironkit::ThunderClan::Tom

[Silverstream]

There ya go!

[Mossshadow::Ivorykit]

Thanks Silver!

Name: Ironkit
Do you honor? Yes
Age: 3 moons
Gender: Male
Appearance: Ironkit takes after his father when it comes to appearances. He has a murky brown/dark brown/butterscotch pelt. This gives him the perfect camouflage for Tunderclan territory. His fur is short like both of his parents. He has the same eyes as his father as well. (Which are a murky greenish brown.) However, he has the same small body as his mother. He has very weak muscles, as he is shy and doesn’t play with the other kits very much. His eyes have a creamy-butterscotch ring around them and his maw has a few spots of the same color. His claws are short and his teeth are uncommonly dull, which gives him no reason to play-fight (Since he'd always lose.) which also contributes to a weak body.
RP Example: Ironkit sat. And stared. And waited. He couldn’t wait for his father to get home. He had just gone out on a hunting patrol. Huhh, Ironkit sighed. If only I could be such a noble fighter and hunter and…………..well, an overall noble clan cat. He was lost in thoughts of admiration when his mother, Crystalheart, sat down next to him. “Hey, Ironkit.” “Hey, Mom. Do you know when Dad will get back?” Ironkit asked. “Oh, I don’t know, probably somewhere near sunhigh.” “What! Who knows when that’ll be!” Ironkit moaned. “Umm, sunhigh?” his mother remarked sarcastically. Just, at that moment, Poisonclaw leaped through the gorse hollow that served as an entrance to the camp. He was panting when the other cats of the hunting patrol entered the camp after him. Poisonclaw opened his mouth and cried out one of the most feared words to all forest cats. “Twolegs!” Not a second after the word escaped his father’s maw when Ironkit picked up the sounds of Twolegs crashing through the trees. ((And for the admins reading this, the humans are kids and they take Ironkit with them, so it doesn’t affect the whole forest.))
Clan: Thunderclan
Rank: Kit
Breed: Tortoiseshell
Personality: Ironkit is a very shy kit. When you first meet him, it will seem awkward talking to him, because he won’t take up the conversation real well. But once he feels comfortable around you, he will be the most loyal and trustworthy friend you could ever have. And because he is so shy, most other kits think he is……..well, flat out weird. But he does have a few close friends to whom he shows his “people person” side. He has never broken any rules and wouldn’t think of trying to because he places the warrior code under the highest respect. (Like father, like son.) He doesn’t do much physical activity, and since his muscles are so weak, he doesn’t think he would do the clan much good as a warrior. So instead of dreaming of becoming a deputy or clan leader like other kits, he wishes to be a medicine cat. He hopes to get Rippedbelly as a mentor when he becomes apprenticed.
History: Ironkit was born in newleaf one season ago. He is the son of Crystalheart, his mother who was born rouge, and Poisonclaw, the warrior who saved his mother from certain death. (For parent’s history, go to: 1) All accepted cats (located at home.) 2) All accepted Thunderclan cats. 3) Poisonclaw::Thunderclan::Tom or Crystalheart::Thunderclan::She-cat.) When he was born, he was the only kit of his litter to survive. All of his siblings were attacked by foxes. He was the only one who wasn’t taken. He hasn’t made many friends in the nursery, but his best friend, since he sees her so much, is his mother. ((Sorry to the admins that this is so short. I didn’t want to post the parents history all over again so….))
Pictures:
www.animalfriendsrescue.org/images/animals/cat_zoe.jpg

[Flintpelt [Spideh]]

Ooo. Nice bio. Though I'm not quite certain, perhaps two or three more sentences on appearance?

[Silverstream]

So now you're going to have IRONKIT taken? But that'll just leave.... WAAAHHH!!!

Like Spideh said, more appearance.

[Mossshadow::Ivorykit]

Is this better?

Sorry Silver. if you want to check the Thunderclan warriors den, it continues onto my bio.

And I'm not ready for You-know-who to do You-know-what to You-know-who, in case you're wondering.

[Flintpelt [Spideh]]

I'm lost on this, so I'll just check the stuff x33

Looks fine to me. Silver?

[Silverstream]

Yep! 'cepted!