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Post by Silverstream on Jun 13, 2006 12:16:59 GMT -5
Post here!
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Post by Mossshadow::Ivorykit on Jun 13, 2006 12:22:32 GMT -5
Name: Crystalheart Do you honor? Yes Age: 2 Years Gender: She-cat Appearance: Crystalheart has an almost entirely white body. This helps her to blend in with the snow in winter. And since she keeps her fur very clean, she was given Crystal as part of her name when she joined the clan. Parts of her face, ears, body, and tail have black splotches on them. She has muddy-green colored eyes, like the banks of the river. She has long claws that have served her well many a time in battle. She has a crooked tail, which is due to her fighting among rogues (see history). She has slightly darker paws, which have a creamish hue to them. RP Example: “Get away from me!” Ziggy screamed over her shoulder. The dog was gaining on her. That stupid Twoleg couldn’t hold onto its leash. Why does stuff like this always happen to me! Just last week, I decide to stay under someone’s porch and get attacked by possums. Yesterday, I go into somebody’s garden and get attacked by a badger. And now I get attacked by a dog! Is there no end to this! Lost in thoughts, Ziggy had run out of the Twoleg place and was now surrounded by trees. Oh, no! A dead end! Ziggy spun around, willing to take her chances. The dog had stayed on her scent and had followed her into the clearing. The dog came towards her, and just as it was about to jump, a blur of fur flew out of the trees and attacked the dog. This new cat used such techniques and force that Ziggy was stunned stupid. The dog had seemed to have had its fill and retreated. The cat swung its head around at Ziggy. “Well, I better go get Flamingstar for this one.” Clan: Thunderclan Rank: Queen/Warrior ((She was a queen, but now she's a warrior)) Breed: Unknown Personality: Crystalheart is a very sweet and cheerful she-cat. When she was new to the clan, she had a bad reputation because she was born rouge. But she was determined to prove that she was a good cat and warrior, so she has never broken any rules. She loves her friends and has many of them (now that she’s proven herself to the clan). She also loves her mate, Poisonclaw. Crystalheart protects her only surviving son, Ironkit, with her life. The bonds that she has with her friends and family show that she is very dedicated and slightly overprotective. History: Crystalheart was born as a rouge cat who lived in the Twoleg neighborhood on the edge of Thunderclan territory. In her childhood, she had bent her tail in many places due to fighting rouge cats. This characteristic gave her the rouge name, Ziggy. She was found being attacked by a dog by Poisonclaw. She was at the time to old for apprentice training, so Flamingstar requested, as her rescuer, that Poisonclaw should train her privately to be a warrior. After her training, she had her warrior ceremony and fought many times in battle. Later, she became a queen as Poisonclaw’s mate. She had her first litter in winter, and all of her kits died of greencough. Her second litter was attacked by foxes. The only one to survive the ambush was Ironkit. Afterlosing both of her first two litters, (except Ironkit) she has no will to have any more kits. Pictures: 
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Post by Silverstream on Jun 13, 2006 12:34:00 GMT -5
Accepted unless otherwise noted.
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Post by Katze on Jun 13, 2006 23:16:31 GMT -5
Just telling you, that was only eight sentences. I know it isn't that big of a deal to add two more, but it could've helped.
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Post by Silverstream on Jun 14, 2006 8:09:24 GMT -5
Erm... 8 sentences? Where? I thought it was pretty good. I checked the rp example length...
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