SnowClaw

[Snowstar]

Name: Snowclaw
Do you honor?: yes
Age: 6 seasons
Gender: Tom
Appearance: This tom has a frosty colored coat.He has bright blue eyes like the sky.He is rather large for most cats and is ver strong.He has small paws and ears.


RP Example: Snowclaw strolled out of the warriors den after a long nap. As he walked out Snowflakes fell from the sky onto his pelt and the cold wind of leaf bare ruffled his fur. The white warrior Sat down into the snow and began licking his white pelt. When he finished his pelt shined like the snow and Snowclaw yawned showing his razor sharp teeth. The young warrior slowly for up and stretched his front legs. His muscles rippled under his frosty pelt as he stretched his back legs. Shaking the snow off his fur he padded to the middle of the clearing. Snowclaw looked around the camp to see if anyone was awake. Seeing that no cat had awoken yet the Large tom bounded off toward the entrance, deciding to go hunt,
Clan: ThunderCLan
Rank: Deputy/Warrior
Breed: Simease mix
Personality: Kind,caring and Loyal are the caristics of the tom. When he was a kit he was hyperactive and loved to play. Since his mentor and Mother had died he had become more quiet. Even though he isnt as happy as he was once before this young tom will protect his clan and leader with his life.
History: When SnowClaw was born his Father had died from a tradagty with the thunderpath. Than soon after he had become an apprentice his mother had gotton killed by a badger. Right than and there the young tom thought that nothing could be worse than this. Right after he became a warrior though his mentor had gotton killed by a fox.Snowclaw was devestated with all the deaths he had seen. From than on he decided that he would try to prevent any cat from dying and protect the clan with his life. The only family that he had left is his brother Blizzardpelt and even he is in windclan. SnowClaw doesnt know how his brother got there only his parents had known where he had gone to. They would never tell the young tom and soon they had died so they dont know what to do. SnowClaw still is a NOble cat and will die to protect his clanmates.
Codewords: "Zeik" "The Ancient Ways"

[Flintpelt [Spideh]]

A few notes:

- You name must be like this (Snowclaw). The first part is capitilized, and the second part is not capitilized.
- Could you proof read your RP example, please? Just check your spelling, and examples. Make sure things are capitilized in the wrong places, etc.

[Snowstar]

I fixed it!



((I think....))

[Flintpelt [Spideh]]

You have random capitilization throughout your RP example. I won't make you change it now, but make sure you watch for it in the future.

Your name has not changed.

[Snowstar]

Name?

[Flintpelt [Spideh]]

The first part of you name (Snow) is capitilized. The second part (claw) is not capitilized. You should have it like this. (Snowclaw)

[Snowstar]

There....I fixed it!

[Flintpelt [Spideh]]

Okay, accepted!