Hunting.......

[crystalrain]

Crystalrain was crouched in the wet grass. The sun was rising which made her fluffy silver fur shine. She had a very pretty body and face. Her bright green eyes were stalking a rabbit. With all her concentration she waited for it to turn around. Then Crystalrain pounced with her claws unsheathed. Her graceful legs stretching to where the rabbit still stood. In a moment she was on top of it and it was in her mouth. How can these animals be so stupid. No wonder they get caught, Crystalrain thought to herself. She buried her fresh kill to get later for her clan and continued searching but before she took a step she heard another cat approching.....

((Yes, its short but I have to go to school. yuk!))

[Katze]

A cat with an all white pelt, with the exception of a little bit of brown splotched everywhere, padded silently near where she had heard the noise. Opening her mouth, she scanned with her brown and blue eyes so she would have the best tracking. Her mouth scented a cat's odor, while her eyes saw the feline. Crystalrain. Crystalrain was deputy of ShadowClan. Though Burningice did not really like talking to any high rank-Medicine Cat, Leader, and Deputy-she figured this to be a point of change.

(Mine is more short. I just got back from a vacation where my sleep was apparently limited to only 5 hours a night.)