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Post by Shadowspirit on Mar 13, 2006 9:15:33 GMT -5
(( Is this okay?))
Shadowspirit walked down the hill to find some prey for him to eat. As he was walking he smelled the horrid stench of blood and death! He raced down the hill and what he saw chilled him to the bone. He quickly hid behind a rock as to not be seen by the dominant rouge. He stepped out ready to take chase and when he saw nothing but the dead body of the rouge the dominant rouge had killed he sat down and licked his chest. He wondered who the rouge was and what it was doing on his terf.
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Post by Silverstream on Mar 13, 2006 18:13:47 GMT -5
((Please work on your detail, and your cat's thoughts, and it'll be alright. Don't forget to tell your leader about this!))
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Post by Shadowspirit on Mar 14, 2006 8:41:00 GMT -5
((Okay I will tell whoever my leader is what I saw!))
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Post by Shadowspirit on Mar 15, 2006 8:50:23 GMT -5
(Who is my leader?))
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Post by Spiderbreath||Soul on Mar 15, 2006 9:24:40 GMT -5
((One problem: First of all, that post needs to be ten sentences long. Second, your cat has still not been accepted. I should know. I'm the one that commented.))
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Post by Silverstream on Mar 15, 2006 19:40:43 GMT -5
((Wait- they haven't been accepted? No wonder! Oh, and I'm your leader, Rapidstar. See my siggy.))
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Sabbath
Apprentice
Suicide Hotline...Please hold
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Post by Sabbath on Jun 23, 2006 16:11:09 GMT -5
Also she/he did a double post. *Shakes head*
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