Loner Healing Process

[Dawnstorm]

[[Sorry! I went to Six Flags today and saved a girl's cellphone on Nitro!]]

Dawnstorm dashed into her den past Rapidstar, Strife, and Marley, paws instinctively stepping here and not there with practiced grace. The she-cat meowed, exteneding a paw towards an empty nest she was going to clear out earlier, "Place him there. But be careful; I'll need one of the apprentices to fetch new moss later."

The ginger feline then put her head under Marley's free shoulder. She guided the rest of the cats to the old nest. Worry clouded her emerald-gold eyes as she thought of this cat dying.

Ruined reputation. Lifeless body. And eternal worry and dread.

[Katze]

OOC: Watch it. Getting close with the ten non diolage sentences.... (I don't accept two worded simple fragments as sentences.)

[Silverstream]

((It's dialogue... *creeps back into shadows*))
Rapidstar gently let the loner's body leave her shoulders. As soon as the loner touched the ground, Rapidstar seemed to feel the world freeze, and an extreme lightness took her body. It was as if she could float off the ground with a single, effortless push of her toes. Rapidstar's mind drifted in the haze.

What happened? Was she dead? Rapidkit struggled hard to free herself from the brambles in the nursery wall, but couldn't break free. Each thorn easily peirced her feather-light pelt, and she could feel her body was clearly wet. Her eyes had shut tight after she watched the badger take her brother away. "Cometkit!" she screamed "Cometkit come back!" Tears welled up behind her eyelids, but did not flow down, as they were to tightly shut. Rapidkit's constant loud mewls of "Cometkit!" brought a warrior into the den not long after. "What are you doing in here?" she asked, while untangling the sobbing kit. "What happened?" Had the clan not noticed at all? Had they been to busy with their own little lives to notice a badger slaying a warrior, two queens, two kits, and dragging the last kit off? Rapidkit's sobbing turned to anger. Anger at her clan. Anger at the badger. The next badger she saw, and the one after that, and the one after that would pay dearly. "Didn't you see a badger drag my brother out?!" she screamed at the warrior. She had been completely freed of the tangling thorns, and now her body dripped with blood. Her white pelt was dyed red, and slicked back against her body. Rapidkit did not feel any outside pain, but she would later. Her body shook with the effort of standing alone, but she did not notice. All that mattered was finding her brother. A split moment after shouting at the warrior queen, she sprang out of the den looking to find the badger.
To find the bader and flay him.

Rapidstar pushed up on her toes, and the lightness flooded out of her, disappating(sp?) into the ground. She fell back onto her feet again, and glaced around the den. She could now turn around to see who had helped her carry the loner back to camp. "Thank you," she breathed, before turning, but upon seeing that it was the loner in the woods who had helped her, surprise took her. "You? You helped me carry him?" Confusion shone clearly in Rapidstar's eyes, as loners never, and never helped another cat. "What is your name?" she asked. She would like to call this cat by its proper name before beginning to interrogate it, then thank it.

[ARTEMISxxx]

"Strife."
The tom answered simply, his raspy voice sounded as if it had never been used.Twin pools of golden yellow studied the she-cat's clear blue ones with defiance.He had already(in a way) intruded upon their camp, and he doubted they could find one reason to not flay him to peices and scatter his limbs across the dark forest. He was fearful, but not in the way one would think. He would never see what it was like to have a family. Never to see was it was like to be in a Clan, with clanmates surrounding him on all sides...
The simple thought of never experiencing those enraged him so the fur on the nape of his neck lay unsettled.After he had gone all this way to transport the fellow loner into the camp, he dared them to tell him that he didn't belong here at the time.
Weeeell...I'll just take my LONER buddy here and go then...,
Would be his response.Afraid before, but not anymore. He had the right to be here as much as the other loner.He helped, so he would stay. If they ran him off, so be it.

[Silverstream]

((Do you want to enter RiverClan? I can have Rapidstar ask... Sorry for the OOC only... Can't really post until I get an answer))

[Dawnstorm]

((Sorry... My creativity is back though! I am serious!))


Dawnstorm looked at her clearly upset leader to the defiant loner with a confused twist to her lips. Then she looked the the delirious, wounded loner and started out of the shadowy depths of her den. "I am getting clean moss," she called over her shoulder. The medicine cats dark paws pounded on the compacted earth as she pelted towards the small gap in the bramble wall.
What did that to him? Another loner? A dog? No... It had to be a Two-leg. Her lips lifted to reveal jagged ivories in an unintentionally snarl.
"Two-legs!" she spat. "What the world would be without them! It would be like Silverpelt itself!"
The she-cat raked up some springy moss and shook the moisture free with a hooked claw. Then shestored them in her mouth, making it considerably dry and she wasn't ables to fully close her jaws with the enormous amount she picked.
Stumbling like a Two-leg kit, she tried to find her way back to her and her Clan's home.

[ARTEMISxxx]

((You mean...ShadowClan, right?XD Taintedstar is the leader of RiverClan. Rapidstar is leader of ShadowClan. xDDDD Sure, if you want.))

[Silverstream]

((*slaps forehead* Sorry. I meant ShadowClan. Rapidstar is the charrie on Forest of Shadows, and is leader of RiverClan. Ask Storm... I mean Dawn. Sorry I can't post right now, but I will asap. Sister's trying to get me off...))

[The Everlasting SUNNEH.]

((Since I am checking in on my WAR thread now and then, I guess a post won't be too bad, eh? ))

The limp body of the loner lay there, sleek and tired. His long torso seemed dead, and his breathing was slowing. He rasped out two words, which showed his politeness and gratitude towards the cats that surrounded him.

"Thank you."

What else was he to say? "Geroff my propertee?" No. Marley may be a loner, but he was polite when dieing. He meant it to each of the three cats in a different way. The loner, Strife, and risked being seen by Clan cats, and actually HELPED clan cats carry him here. Something only a dedicated loner would do. The leader, Rapidstar, for letting him come into her camp, and be healed. And the gorgeous medicine cat, Dawnstorm, whom was going to try her hardest to heal him. They all played a part in this simple ending. But perhaps it was only a begging.. A beggining to a brand new adventure with different twists and turns that you never thought you could outrun. Marley took a short breath, gasping for life.