Post by Hawkstar on Jun 10, 2006 17:15:07 GMT -5
((Imagine this is night peeps!!!))
The nightwind blew, turning the camp into a freezing, crisp, wastland. Of course, it only seemed that way because of the night, the wind, but worse, the fog. The WindClan leader had a fear of fog, bad memories. His father, Silvertail, had died because of the fog.
Silvertail, the old deputy, from long ago, had been out hunting. It was a horrible foggy new-leaf day. But the Clan had been desperate for fresh-kill, many cats were ill. He was trying to find prey, but the fog made it almost impossible. The gray mass that covered the forest like a veil masked all smells, including the Thunderpath.
Silvertail had always been hard on hearing, so he never heard the approaching monster. But it came and hit him. As it rolled away into a path of fog, Silvertail lay unconsious. Within a few minutes another monster approached him, but incredibly it stopped. A two-leg stepped out and moved Silvertail into the forest. He began to stir. He looked into the eyes of the two-leg, let a meow, and died in its arms.
That was the sad and horrific experiance Hawkstar had with fog, But now these bad memories haunt him in his sleep, or could it be StarClan calling? Hawkstar knew he must visit Moonstone, but must speak with his deputy first, so that he could explain their reason for the long and tiresome travel to Moonstone.
In his dreams, Hawkstar was sprinting through the forest, calling out his fathers name. Then he would stop, look into the eyes of an unknow beast and hear the words, "nos ym ouy evol I." Hawkstar figured it to be a message of StarClan, but what did it mean? What cat sent it? Was it a message from his father?
((read it backwards... tehee I am clever
sorry to brag, but.. wahoo! 295 non-dialauge sentances!!!))
The nightwind blew, turning the camp into a freezing, crisp, wastland. Of course, it only seemed that way because of the night, the wind, but worse, the fog. The WindClan leader had a fear of fog, bad memories. His father, Silvertail, had died because of the fog.
Silvertail, the old deputy, from long ago, had been out hunting. It was a horrible foggy new-leaf day. But the Clan had been desperate for fresh-kill, many cats were ill. He was trying to find prey, but the fog made it almost impossible. The gray mass that covered the forest like a veil masked all smells, including the Thunderpath.
Silvertail had always been hard on hearing, so he never heard the approaching monster. But it came and hit him. As it rolled away into a path of fog, Silvertail lay unconsious. Within a few minutes another monster approached him, but incredibly it stopped. A two-leg stepped out and moved Silvertail into the forest. He began to stir. He looked into the eyes of the two-leg, let a meow, and died in its arms.
That was the sad and horrific experiance Hawkstar had with fog, But now these bad memories haunt him in his sleep, or could it be StarClan calling? Hawkstar knew he must visit Moonstone, but must speak with his deputy first, so that he could explain their reason for the long and tiresome travel to Moonstone.
In his dreams, Hawkstar was sprinting through the forest, calling out his fathers name. Then he would stop, look into the eyes of an unknow beast and hear the words, "nos ym ouy evol I." Hawkstar figured it to be a message of StarClan, but what did it mean? What cat sent it? Was it a message from his father?
((read it backwards... tehee I am clever
sorry to brag, but.. wahoo! 295 non-dialauge sentances!!!))
