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Post by midnightmousefur on Jun 15, 2006 16:49:57 GMT -5
"Ahh.." Midnight Mousefur said limping her fur all torn up and scratches bleeding causing blood to fall on the ground. "Stupid badgers" Midnight mousefur grumbled to herself. Limping her way toward the Medicine Cats Den she fell to the ground from the blood loss not moving
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Post by Flintpelt [Spideh] on Jun 15, 2006 23:14:24 GMT -5
1. Too short. 2. Run-on sentences. 3. Not accepted character. 4. Username not capitalized. 5. You may only have a two-part (as in Spiderbreath), one-part (as in Spider/Soul) or random (as in Ziggu) name. 6. Not correct capitalization. 7. Badgers? Nonono. Not even badger. You need three or more cats to take down a badger. There is no exception.
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