Thread for Rosepaw: Blacktail:ShadowClan:she-cat

[Flintpelt [Spideh]]

You can post yer bio now, Roseh n_n

[Rosepaw]

Thankeh!
Name: Blacktail
Do you honor?: Of course!
Age: 20 moons
Gender: She-cat
Appearance: Blacktail is an all white kitty. Almost. She has black on her paws like her ancestor, Blackfoot. Her tail is black, too, and it is very long. Her ears are also black, too. Her eyes are a crystal clear blue, and they are deep. Blacktail is small and lean. Her tail is longer than the rest of her body! Her ears are small and delicate, perched on top of her head like two birds on their nest. Her nose is a tiny, pink thing that rests as if a strong wind could blow it off. Her whiskers are long and silky and wiry. Her claws are short, but they are sharp and deadly! Her fur is short and silky, too.
RP Example: She scented another cat, a rogue on ShadowClan territory. She had to defend it! Blacktail raced into the forest. It was a rogue cat she was chasing, and she could smell his fear scent. Running, running, paws striking up dust clods as she raced through. Dodging a pine tree, Blacktail saw a flash of golden fur as she ran. She climbed over a patch of ivy. Feeling joy at the thrill of the pursuit, Blacktail raced harder. She was at an advantage. This was her territory. This was her homeland. The other cat was growing weary of pursuit, and Blacktail sensed this, and pounced. "Who are you, and what are you doing on our territory?" she demanded to know. That was before she got a good look at this cat. He was a large, golden tom, with wise blue eyes that captivated her. He looks strong, and kind of handsome, she thought. He seemed awed by her, too, and Blacktail repeated her question. The rogue cat stood up and announced, "I am Goldenrock. Who are you, ShadowClan kitty-pet?" Blacktail arched her back and hissed, "I am Blacktail, proud warrior of ShadowClan. You are on our territory!" He hissed back, "Who really owns this land?" He looks strong, but he has the attitude to match. Blacktail was too shocked, but she managed to ask, "Would you like to join our Clan?" She knew they needed warriors. He nodded curtly, and followed her back. Will StarClan accept this? Will the other ShadowClan cats? Secretly, Blacktail knew she was already in love with this cat. She pushed this thought to the side of her mind. Did he feel the same way?
Clan: ShadowClan
Rank: Warrior/Queen
Breed: Siamese
Personality: Blacktail is a lonely ShadowClan female. She has a sensitive side that most cats do not see. They see the fierce warrior in her, the defensive cat that she was taught to be. Blacktail wants a mate, someone else who feels the same way as she does. She is very loving to those few that surpass her standards that she has set. Blacktail is very loyal and would die to protect her Clan and the ones she loves. She can be quite funny and clever, and is also very good with kits. Blacktail is kind to cats of all statures and births. To the half-blood cat, she is sympathetic. To the cat whose mate has died, whether in birth or in battle, she is comforting. But she is fiesty, too! In the heat of battle, she will never run away unless the order is given to do so. She will stand and fight beside her Clan to the end.
History: Blacktail was born to a family with 5 other siblings, but by the time she was apprenticed, she had no family left. Her father was killed in a battle against a rival Clan. Her mother died of the same sickness that took three of her siblings: GreenCough. Then, less than a moon later, her brother was carried off by a hawk and her sister a badger. Blacktail was a clever cat as she became apprenticed. She knew the right way to catch prey very quickly. She also learned to fight very quickly. As she became a warrior, she remembered the siblings and parents she had lost as a kit. In her mind, they were standing right beside her. And she knew that they always would be. Whenever she felt frusturated or agitated, she remembers those that she loved.
Pictures: Not available, sorry.

[Silverstream]

Add 5 more lines to Appearance at least, you need more in your rp example, more Personality, and more History. Also, if you want your cat to be a queen, you have to ask the admins. And considering that you want a queen in ShadowClan... it should be alright. Just check with Spideh first.

[Flintpelt [Spideh]]

A queen? Of course :3 ShadowClan has the lowest cat count for now.
So... how about three kits?

[Rosepaw]

Yeah! The other cat I'm creating, Goldenrock, will be her mate. I'll fix this and start Goldenrock's tomorrow.

[Flintpelt [Spideh]]

Okee :3 Then, as soon as Blacktail is accepted, you'll just have to wait two weeks for the kits to come. Unless, of course, they're already half-way xP

[Silverstream]

Rosepaw? Could you fix Blacktail's bio?

[Rosepaw]

Just did!

[Silverstream]

You might need more of a rp example, considering all the dialogue used, and also asking a cat to join a clan isn't that simple. You'll have to make it a bit longer if you want that same theme. Have Blacktail's thoughts in there.

[Rosepaw]

Okay, and I'll fix his RP example tomorrow.

[Rosepaw]

Is she good now?

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