Hawkstar
Warrior
Queen Grafix = me
Posts: 106
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Post by Hawkstar on May 20, 2006 10:15:08 GMT -5
Display Name: Longclaw Characters: Hawkstar ~ Leader of WindClan RP Example: Creeping through the forest was a black cat. He shown great strength, yet a rouge believed he could defeat him in battle. But this wasn't just any rouge, it was Longclaw's uncle. Longclaw noticed his uncle's, Sharptail, presence and knew, there would be a fight. He knew Sharptail would attack any moment now. Now Longclaw had a decision to make, loyalty to his mentor, old friend, and uncle; loyalty to his beloved leader, clan mates, family, and RiverClan. Longclaw weighed his choices. With in a few moments, he chose loyalty to his clan. Before Sharptail could even turn and pounce, Longclaw was in the air. "You still think you can beat me?", meowed Longclaw, in a relaxed tone. His uncle hated when Longclaw was relaxed in battle. "Don't think for a minute you are stronger Longclaw!", yowled Sharptail. Longclaw unsheathed his claws, and nervously put them to use. "Goodbye Uncle!", he bellowed, "This is the end to RiverClan's torture of you!" Longclaw lifted his black paw and brought it down on Sharptail's throat. It was somewhat hard for Longclaw to do this to his own uncle and mentor, but his loyalty to his clan is everlasting. Once he returned back to camp, after burying Sharptail, he yowled, "We shall never be bothered my Sharptail again..." Meows of joy erupted, and soon, Taintedstar, the leader of RiverClan, called a meeting in honor of Longclaw.
Why you should get this character: I believe I should get this character because I am an experienced role-player, I will always follow out with doing the roles as Deputy, and I have always loved RiverClan. Some other reasons I believe I should get my character is Longclaw will be loyal, trusting, and reliable. He will be strong in fights, (but of course, no God-modding or anything). Also, I hope that when the decision is made, my cat can still be used in this Clan if not the deputy. I will be on as much as possible so Longclaw can full-fill his deputy duties.
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Post by Katze on May 20, 2006 12:44:55 GMT -5
Okay: I think that the way you made your Rp example could be a little less choppy, and that your reasons for getting this character should be longer and not just about your qualities.
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Post by Silverstream on May 20, 2006 16:06:17 GMT -5
One: You can't have two high-ranked charries!!! I just noticed that... I think you'll have to give up Goldenleaf. Two: RiverClan deputy has been autitioned for time and time again. The position decsision(sp?) is up to Artemis.
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Hawkstar
Warrior
Queen Grafix = me
Posts: 106
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Post by Hawkstar on May 20, 2006 18:55:03 GMT -5
Two is ok but the Admins are ok with me having Goldenleaf as well. So please leaver her!!! P.S. Congrats on your G-Mod-ing
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Hawkstar
Warrior
Queen Grafix = me
Posts: 106
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Post by Hawkstar on May 20, 2006 18:55:25 GMT -5
And I'll fix it Krova!
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Post by Katze on May 20, 2006 22:37:06 GMT -5
Wait, what? Who approved you to have two high-ranking characters? I never said anything, and Spideh agreed on the rule. You shouldn't even have both Hawkstar and Goldenleaf.
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Post by Flintpelt [Spideh] on May 21, 2006 12:28:02 GMT -5
Hey, I just noticed that. Three high ranks? That's just not allowed! One high rank is the highest. Last time I checked over your bio, you didn't have your charries in your siggeh. So I asked you to do it. If you had had your charries, then I would have noticed, and told you to change it. Sorreh.
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Post by Katze on May 21, 2006 12:39:53 GMT -5
It's okay. *pat back* Well..... You can't be the deputy of RiverClan:Leader of WindClan:Medicine Cat of ThunderClan. This character is no longer going to be worked on, unless you make it a NightClan cat. Since we already have a deputy for WindClan, and we are in desperate need of Medicine cats, I say we take Hawkfrost away and put them on the Adoption board, I will also do the same with this character, Longclaw, if you feel that all the work was put to waste.
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Hawkstar
Warrior
Queen Grafix = me
Posts: 106
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Post by Hawkstar on May 21, 2006 20:21:34 GMT -5
ok, let me get this strait, Longclaw can't be deputy of RiverClan, but my other cats I keep? ok, but can I keep Longclaw? as a regular cat? In whichever Clan you want? I really love my kitty Longclaw...
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Post by Silverstream on May 21, 2006 20:34:28 GMT -5
It seemed to me that Hawkstar can no longer be Hawkstar, but you can keep Goldenleaf as the Med. Cat. You can keep all your charries, but they all mus downgrade to warriors, except Goldenleaf.
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Post by ROA((Dolly)) on May 24, 2006 17:28:46 GMT -5
She can't be leader and deputy of WindClan!
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Hawkstar
Warrior
Queen Grafix = me
Posts: 106
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Post by Hawkstar on May 25, 2006 9:54:53 GMT -5
how about this, I KEEP Hawkstar, and downgrade the OTHER two. This way your happy, and I'm happy!
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Post by ROA((Dolly)) on May 25, 2006 12:17:12 GMT -5
'cause I am! LOL
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Post by Flintpelt [Spideh] on May 25, 2006 14:31:35 GMT -5
Hmmm. Yes, but there's a bitty problem. Someone will need to make a ThunderClan Med. cat soon. Ferneh and me need him or her for an RP love plot.
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Post by ROA((Dolly)) on May 25, 2006 14:32:37 GMT -5
Hey... Hawkstar could retire, and the other could like.. Yeah, and then you can be deputy! You last longer.. lol. ((When do we start the plot))
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